From: The Boomerang Team <[email protected]>
From: The Boomerang Team <[email protected]>
To: [email protected]
Subject: Secrets of Writing the Perfect Email (and your Year in Review)
Date: Thu, 18 Feb 2016 14:24:06 +0000
a Your 2015 in Review with Boomerang for Gmail
Happy (Lunar) New Year!
We hope this is both the last (yep, this was supposed to go out early in January. Happy Year
of the Monkey!) and, more importantly, the most useful year-in-review email you'll receive from
a web service this year! At Boomerang HO, we spend a lot of time thinking about email and
how we can use it to communicate more effectively.
Over the past year, our customers asked Boomerang to remind them if someone didn't
respond to over 40 million emails. So we decided that rather than email you to brag about how
much we've grown* or show you our swanky new logo", we'd review the year by figuring out
what factors matter when you want to get a response to your messages.
There's a lot of advice about how to write a good email on the web, from general writing
advice to full sets of pre-written email templates. But almost none of that advice shows the
data behind it (we're guessing because there isn't any), and a lot of it contradicts itself.
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So here's the roundup of what really matters when you're sending an email, and how much
each factor matters.
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Sentiment graph
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One of the most significant factors in determining response rates is how positive (words like
great) or negative (words like bad) the words in the message are. Emails that were slightly to
moderately positive OR slightly to moderately negative elicited between 5-15% more
responses than emails that were completely neutral.
We would advise against both excessive flattery and writing hostile, day-ruining screeds.
Poisonously negative emails were less likely than even neutral emails to get a response, and
extremely positive emails did little better.
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Message length data
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The sweet spot for email length is between 50-125 words, yielding response rates
above 50%. While average emails from Jeb and Hillary clock in at 10 and 9 words
respectively, unless you're running for President, sending emails that short mean you'll
sacrifice about 30% of your responses. Response rates slowly declined from 125 word
messages to 500 word messages, then fell faster after that. So if you need to send War and
Peace, you might want to send it as an attachment!
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Subject length data
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Email marketing veterans know that testing subject lines is a critical step in designing an email
campaign that will have a high open rate. Likewise, the length of your subject line impacts
response rates, and the optimal length is shorter than we expected. Subject lines with only 3-4
words (excluding email conventions like Re: and Fwd:) received the most responses.
Including some sort of subject line is critical: only 14% of messages without any subject line at
all received a response.
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Reading Grade Level Data
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Our most surprising finding was that the reading grade level of your emails has a dramatic
impact on response rates. Emails written at a 3rd grade reading level were optimal, providing
a 36% lift over emails written at a college reading level and a 17% higher response rate than
emails written at a high school reading level.
The main components of reading grade level scores are the number of syllables in your words
and the number of words in your sentences. So try using shorter sentences and simpler words
than you normally would. You can check your contenrs reading grade level in the Word Count
tool in most word processors, or search for "Flesch Kincaid grade level" to find a multitude of
online tools.
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Question Data Subjectivity Data
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The number of questions you ask in an email
has a sweet spot, just like the number of
words you write. We found that emails that
asked 1-3 questions are 50% more likely
to get a response than emails asking no
questions. But a bombardment of questions
won't help you either - an email with 3
questions is 20% more likely to get a
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If your natural writing style has a "just the
facts, ma'am" bias, you should consider
including more opinions and more
subjectivity into your messages! The more
opinionated the content of the email, the
higher the response rate climbed. One
caveat - we have no idea if those subjective
emails generated positive responses or
declarations of war, so caveat writer!
If you found this information helpful, we'd really appreciate it if you shared it with others! Our
blog post describing these findings (with even more details) is available below.
See the blog post!
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Tips to Get a Response
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* Boomerang has almost exactly twice as many users as it had this time last year, in case you
were wondering. Happy customers remain our largest source of growth, so thanks for telling
your friends and coworkers about us!
" OK, we did make our logo swankier. Our designer hopes you noticed!
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